All Comments on 'The Wine is Fine'

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AnonymousAnonymousalmost 15 years ago
Good, but...

Good story, but would be improved by a bit of editing. Lots of spelling and grammar mistakes.

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 15 years ago
Excellent!

Helen is Exactly who I want my Wife to morph into. So sexy-hot, Help me get Her there.

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