All Comments on 'The Wishing Device'

Definitely needs a follow up.

A very fun romp!

Liked it but a follow-up could flesh out the characters beyond cardboard cut-out juvenile stereotypes.

Sequel could also delve into what happened to the Kollar device; it would be interesting if Carly now had possession of it and knowledge of its power.

The border between a fun fantasy and something which is just silly, is very personal. I love mind control device stories, and this had all the right elements, but I’m afraid that for me this was well into the ‘too silly to be enjoyable’ category.

I loved this one, if I had any complaints it's that there wasn't more Molly shenanigans. I could read an entire book about her. The part where the protagonist gave her a bigger ass and made her twerk while she was oblivious made me hard as a rock.

Truly wonderful. Well written and very enjoyable. This deserves many more installments.

I wish I were a desk slave