All Comments on 'The Witch and The Bitch'

I don't normally read this catagory or theme, but I thought the title and description was interesting.

When I started reading, from beggining to the end, I was interested. It's a very original concept and a lot of fun. The sex part was also very erotic and got me aroused.

Thank you for writing this. I really really hope you make some sort of spin off to this story with the same idea, with this same witch doing this to another bitchy lady.

thanks

some justice, too. Nicely done. I can't help but wonder if the Bitch will continue to have this effect on women as she goes about her day. Lots of room for a Chapter 02.

Could you please add a new part to this story? It would be to see her being ravished by various females in different situations.

I'm not sure where to take this story, if you have any suggestions for the next scene please comment!

Very amateur but at least its kind of hot, obviously unfinished and would need more background details

I've actually seen obnoxious insensitive women like her. Next time I'll take pity on them and just say, "lady you need to get laid, I'm offering." Loved the ending of the story...brilliant

This story is hot. You should finish up with the waitress and when she leaves all the lesbians outside are attracted to her