All Comments on 'The Witch and the Demon'

on your first Lit submission. You have written one hot story. I look forward to seeing what else you write in the future. I think you chose a great category to start your career as a now published artist.

Good Luck

Great story and characters. There were a few typos for example "liking", instead of licking. The typos throw off the perfect rhythm of your story and made me have to read it again for understanding.

Please keep up the great work. Personally, I love this genre.