All Comments on 'The Witch and the Watch Pt. 04'

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AnonymousAnonymousover 3 years ago
Unexpected twist

Didn't see him just going so hard pardon the pun on his wife. Hyped for the next chapter.

AnonymousAnonymousover 3 years ago
Very nice

At some point though, they need to be taught to eat pussy. As relentless as his stamina is, he cant always be around. He should learn their sordid secrets too, like he did his wife. She may even have more than she has told. Most women are secretly splutter than we know.

C_frommnC_frommnover 3 years ago

Now that our hero has gotten to this point. its time to figure out how to get room for his Harem, and make the wife complacent and accepting.

AnonymousAnonymousover 3 years ago
What could have been

If the author had ended it after getting the truth from his wife and return the watch, they would have a happy end while the story receives high rating instead of things getting out of control

AnonymousAnonymousabout 3 years ago

Wife has gad at least three different names throughout the story

WeezyfWeezyfover 2 years ago

Because... because I thought you weren't interested in me...oh god...it's so big...I mean...I thought that I wasn't enough to satisfy you. You have me, so why... nnn... should you need anything else?"

With this logic doesnt it mean he wasnt enough to satisfy her since she watches porn as well? Also why does he need to show her she is not enough? A simple “its reasonable for me to have a harem” is enough…?

AnonymousAnonymousabout 1 year ago

Pick one name and one consistent backstory for the wife please. Changing everything around every few hundred words is distracting.

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