All Comments on 'The Witch and the Watch'

Well done, hope you continue with the story!!

Can’t wait to read more. I hope this turns into a nice long series, and not one of those stories that gets abandoned.

Please keep this going mind control stories are my favourite and this has a lot of potential. Loved it!!!E

I can't help but feel that one who owns a magic shop, wouldn't have something planned to automatically help if a situation like this occurred.

5/5 for a good start, I look forward to more chapters.

Keep going! I already know I won’t be able to get enough of this series.

Usually when someone goes with the power fantasy they have the grammar and spelling to make it seem incredibly juvenile. Kudos for having a go at the classic subgenre with a modicum of writing skill. I hope you keep it up and can continue to improve.

Good start, well written and hoping that you continue it

Wish it would have been longer and included his visit home to his wife, but well written and very hot. Great start!

You will continue to write more chapters and also a spin-off of how the coworker found the place and his stories. You will be inspired. You will not stop writing until we are satiated and limp.

Just...amazing

I like where this is going. I eagerly anticipate further installments.

Damn this is one of the more intriguing premises I found recently, hope you make it a small series.

This is a great story!

It feels incomplete, like this is just the first chapter. There is much room to continue for a couple of chapters, as we learn how he uses the watch and ring on his wife; followed by information about him controlling the two women either together or separately.

Maybe some M.C. at work?

Very yummy indeed, I hope that you'll continue this someday! Thank you!

Why don't you continue the story?

Please do more in this series!!!!!!

Nice story like the way he turned it on the Shop Keeper. Now to fix wife and keepher from getting in the way. and fix a few of her friends.

The way he turned the watch against the witch was just stupid.

He is kind of an asshole!!!

Odd little yarn that was fun to read.