All Comments on 'The Wolf and the Raven Ch. 04'

A few missed words and misused words but with a little extra care this would be perfect. I love this genre and you've done a marvelous job with it.

Loved this submission and the previous ones ....very well writ.

This is my favourite story on the whole on the vast internets. It's simply perfect. <3 I'd wish you'd write a fourth, but I don't think that's going to happen. Either way, this is amazing. Love it.

loved it, sweet and romantic, no drama, just love.

perfect.

I really enjoyed this. You could probably develop more story plot to this, to inlude darian's story and also anaia/ lotherius stories.

Oh, for editing purposes, you need to replace "site" with "sight".