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"Good morning, my beautiful Red."
"'m—mo-morning M-Momma."
"Spend a little bit of time with me before you go in there, sweetie."
"Yes, Ma'am...Mmm...I'd...L—love that."
There was a bit of time spent in Rosa's room as heavy kissing was engaged into; followed by the wandering of hands that roamed each others body's. Then, after Red had spent at least an hour of her time just cuddled up to Rosa's naked body, engaging in conversation, she lifted herself from the bed, got dressed again and headed into the kitchen,
Red was about to start on breakfast for herself and Rosa when she heard a loud knock on the door. And she went to answer it; opening the door up, only to be shocked when she saw Thomas standing there with blood all over his overalls, panting heavily and looking like his eyes were about to roll into the back of his head.
"I...I...I'm sorry...Red..." And he doubled over onto the ground; collapsing onto his back.
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This is the end of part 1. I'll be working on part 2 soon, so please stay put for when its done. Leave a comment, let me know what you thought of the story, if you loved it or hated it and if you saw the incestual twist that was coming.
- COMMENTS
Anonymousover 6 years agoI gotta admit, Red sleeping with Rosa caught me off-guard since she so vehemently denied her Pa's attempts (rightfully so, besides blood-related intercouse). I am eagerly awaiting more of her relationship with Thomas, which may be blossoming into something else, a good slow burner that really gets me going. Keep up the good work!
CoraGhostover 6 years agoI think that before trying to correct someone, you should start with yourself... In your fifth line you used the word 'quiet', and the correct one is quit.
Seriously, so amateur... Also, you can't say 'you says', genius. Is 'you said'.
On another note... FantasyFanX! I really liked your work! Keep it up! I never expected Red to end up with her mother... But I surely liked it!
I'll be waiting the second part!
Take care!!! - CG
Anonymousover 6 years agoAlright, I could forgive the amateur need to put in the words Recently, And so, understandably and It goes without saying, but by the third paragraph when you says, sustainable when the word you are looking for is susceptible, I quiet. Three paragraphs in and I quiet. I feel bad. And all that italics shit with the what if stuff, unneeded waste of my time.
