All Comments on 'The Woman on the Bus Ch. 01'

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NoLongerAnonNoLongerAnonover 1 year ago

I remember having read the original story. I don't know how much it has been revised for this publication but it reads very well. I did have a double take when it went straight from deciding not to tell her husband over the phone to describing his reaction to her adventures.

ArmorlaArmorlaover 1 year ago

Superbly crafted and presented.

ProfQ1955ProfQ1955over 1 year ago

Way to reel the reader in. I am hooked.

AnonymousAnonymousover 1 year ago

Great story looking forward to chapter 2

EroticExperience69EroticExperience69over 1 year ago

I remember the original story, it’s my all time favourite.

Nicole2023Nicole2023about 1 year ago

I’m sorry for your loss, thank you for continuing his legacy

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