by storm_wind
Really liked this, it reminded me of Janine Ashbless of Black Lace books. It didn't need the usual fuck, cunt and cum, would have worked just as well with 'ordinary' wording.
I love stories like this because they are original. But I think the ending could have been a bit better. Seemed like you ended things too quickly when he asked her to come with him and it just ended with him saying come. Other than that, I love it.
Great story, but she left her cat. I fully expected her to say something like, "On one condition, we take my cat with us." And he'd laugh and say yes