All Comments on 'The Women's Spa - Almost'

It’s not that difficult to do a little research about gender

Quite an enjoyable read. I wasn't really sure when it was leading and that kept it a page-turner. I do think that it finished abruptly but that just made it more interesting.

And very well written, although at first I was a bit confused when you jumped from first signing up to back with Ingrid. I thought you had left a page out, but you managed to explain everything in due time.

Thanks!

Your writing never fails to put me (and, I'm sure, all your other readers) right there where the action is. Thank you for another lovely experience!

Love

Marixxxxx

This kind of has the feel of a European erotic movie from the 70's.

I'll pop in and read more of your stuff!

I know of such a place in Hamburg.

The spa scenes were so realistic that you just must have been to one. Love to have been with you Jay.

Another sizzler of a story.

Cat xx

I was enjoying this until the Mata story. It was like pouring ice over my cunt. No longer was it a lesbian story for me. I wanted the mystery woman in the lodge to develop and more in the dark room but not the T one. Each encounter I'd suggest was too short and the Mata one too long.

Author takes way too long to get where she is going. And once there, the payoff is sub par.

Keep trying, Jaybe. This is not up to the elegant and sophisticated standards you aspire to, but never quite reach.

to insult my writing and me?

It’s a pity that the anonymous lady reader doesn’t have a more open attitude to sex. Surely giving and receiving orgasmic pleasure after a nice slow build up is equally good whatever the genders of the participants. Consensual sex that is sensual and tender can lead to the most exquisite delights, and the sex spa you describe doesn’t sound sordid but just a nice place to achieve those delicious heights in ways you feel comfortable with. It is a pleasure to know that this story is based on your personal experiences and so it is deeply arousing to an aged voyeur such as me.

Nice writing and great to read and makes the reader feel good.