All Comments on 'The Writer's Muse Ch. 01'

Nice story, subtler than most but you've got a bloke sitting on your pen frantically semaphoring the plot so there will be no surprises: I figured out where you were going and how it will end about 5 paragraphs in.

165 cm tall. eh?

Pretty sure where at least part of this is going, but i'd like to see it getting there.

Next chapter please?

{I'm a fine one to talk, as i've left my readers hanging for years - i just went dry.}

I thought this was really well written , it maintained my attention all the way through - love to read more

Really enjoyed this one... could see myself reacting the same way!

Please continue, there does seem to be a lot of telegraphing to who Chloe might really be. The characters or good and the way the relationship is developing feels organic.

Would love to see him finish the book have it be a success and help her out and maybe keep her.

Enjoyable story. Thanks for sharing.

This is the sort of writing i enjoy on here! Can't wait for the next chapter!

Loved your story and craving part 2