by bobloblaw33
A classic in itself but well done. It's just that there are too many dreams for my taste, and I also find stories in stories very difficult and didn't work here. You would have preferred to have shown us more details from the protagonists. Thanks anyway
I love your story, i cant waot to hear how the wifes first date goes? I love the fack that she continues to get bolder, and hear how the husband is inspired by his wifes actions!!!
I look forward to part 3!