All Comments on 'The Wrong Man'

by EmeliaBell

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AnonymousAnonymousover 17 years ago
Good

Delightful little story.

Boyd

J G ParkesJ G Parkesover 17 years ago
Wrong man but right story

Thoroughly enjoyable story. Thanks.

duddle146duddle146over 17 years ago
Well Written!

If Writers on Literotica have Seasons, then this Writer is in the Springtime of her Writing Career. This latest effort take a theme we've all read before, i.e., meeting someone off the Internet, and breaths new life into it with just the right amount of plot twists and turns to make it a throughly delightful read. Well Done!

Risq_001Risq_001over 17 years ago
You know I really liked this

I wasn't sure I would at first, but as I scaned the page something made me re-read it. Glad I did. Nice story and done well.

-Risq

rgraham666rgraham666over 17 years ago
Your story…

will be mentioned on the New Reveiws Thread in the Author's Hangout.

Aurora BlackAurora Blackover 17 years ago
Lovely!

The story was very sweet and it put a smile on my face. Thank you.

janiexxjaniexxover 17 years ago
I have to say...

I liked that a lot. Made me smile tonight, something I badly needed to do.

Thanks for writing it.

janiexx

Green_GemGreen_Gemover 17 years ago
Great Stuff

Very nicely written. Had a 'feel-good' quality to it. Thank you

RonClarkesonRonClarkesonover 17 years ago
Nice twist

I just love stories with a twist, you should have got the old guy to say good night to the young guy as victoria and liam left the bar! You know a set up so he could clock her first!

AnonymousAnonymousover 16 years ago
Fun and sweet!

Great job.

DrallDrallabout 15 years ago
Very well done!

Thank you.The first of yours I've read.Now I'll read more.

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 13 years ago
Nice Twist

The story kept me interested and the ending was cute! I would not have expected the turnout, great twist!

tazz317tazz317over 12 years ago
A SCORE CARD AND PICT-O-GRAM WOULD BE NICE

since clue-less Vicky is lost. TK U MLJ LV NV

AnonymousAnonymousabout 6 years ago
shortie but goodie

Put a nice smile on my face. And some deep thoughts in my brain, too.

THX, S.

chytownchytownover 1 year ago

*****Cute fun read. Thanks for sharing.

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