by EmeliaBell
If Writers on Literotica have Seasons, then this Writer is in the Springtime of her Writing Career. This latest effort take a theme we've all read before, i.e., meeting someone off the Internet, and breaths new life into it with just the right amount of plot twists and turns to make it a throughly delightful read. Well Done!
I wasn't sure I would at first, but as I scaned the page something made me re-read it. Glad I did. Nice story and done well.
-Risq
will be mentioned on the New Reveiws Thread in the Author's Hangout.
The story was very sweet and it put a smile on my face. Thank you.
I liked that a lot. Made me smile tonight, something I badly needed to do.
Thanks for writing it.
janiexx
Very nicely written. Had a 'feel-good' quality to it. Thank you
I just love stories with a twist, you should have got the old guy to say good night to the young guy as victoria and liam left the bar! You know a set up so he could clock her first!
The story kept me interested and the ending was cute! I would not have expected the turnout, great twist!
since clue-less Vicky is lost. TK U MLJ LV NV
Put a nice smile on my face. And some deep thoughts in my brain, too.
THX, S.