All Comments on 'The Xmas Party'

Romance? No, not even close.

If Literotica had a Gibberish category this story could be in the Hall of Fame.

It's obvious your British because you're using British slang such as lass, mate and shite, which are not very common here. Also why go to a microbrewery and drink sodas and power drinks? Just saying. I couldn't even finish this because of these glaring issues. Research research research before you write so you sound knowledgable in what you write

Erotic couplings story catagory at best, not romance......... just sex.

Good story!

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