All Comments on 'The Y-Virus Ch. 03'

looking interesting... will read more as you put more chapters up..... just hope.. whatever you write... you leave our hero with some pride atleast.

Hilter...really. In three hundred yrs not one psychopath was able to obtain crazy like him? Think u missed a chance to write your own devilish history creating a new Hannibal and his elephants, Also you could have lead into a great bonding, caring, understanding conversation that once these cryo men were unfrozen that the ladies involved wanted to make them feel as comfortable as possible and one way was too learn as much as they could regarding their time, culture, and environment. That though they were to be used for sperm, some of the women felt it was only fair to treat them better than that. Plus without any males for three years just the interaction alone would be close to sexual gratification

This just seems to be a vehicle for your fantasy. I agree with the other comment, too many missed opportunities for building characters we can care about or identify with. The half hearted dead husband and child was paper thin.

You have some talent but, apparently, no heart.

Needs to be Taken down a "notch" talk about neo-feminist. Bet she was her husbands Mistress. couple that with her son dieing in her arms and she would be Whacked.

This is wonderful and I look forward to reading more!

They strapped dog shock collars to his balls because he might be a rapist? Considering MC came out of a coma to have his balls clamped in a vice, a metal probe shoved up his ass, and his cock milked for it's seed, I'm pretty sure we already know who the rapists in this facility are.