by Jugg_Head
Still my favorite ongoing series! Very jealous of Sam and Matt :)
I personally hope we see more of the BE tropes that have been teased: outgrowing bras, comparing/contrasting with even bustier friends and relatives. But that's just me and my kink.
P.S when did Janice go from Pink -> Blonde?
I appreciate your positive response. This chapter is the least popular by far and I’m learning a lesson from it: stick to the plot, don’t wander too far off the trail.
To those that may be concerned: this was just a one time, voyeuristic side story of someone from the outside looking in. Next chapter will be back on track, bringing Matt back home to Janice and introducing Janice’s sister, Tracy.
Thank you to everyone who has been a loyal reader of this story. I look forward to bringing you more content very soon.
-Jugghead
Kind of a brave thing to do, to split up the main characters in the story. Especially considering they were just bonding. This is a great story, but keep up the pace a bit en don't fall into the pitfall that many other good longer running stories have: adding to many plotlines, characters etc. Most of us are not here to read complex novels. Keep it fun and simple.
Great Story, you have developed a very good storyline. Keep going, can‘t wait to see the next chapter and very much look forward to read about Janice‘s sister. Imagine her to be even bigger in the chest department......
So good. I've enjoyed all of the chapters so far and am looking forward to what you write in the future.
THANKS
Uninteresting side plot on a teenager. Keeping to the protagonists would be my preference. But hey, who am i...
I agree with you. I thought an outsider’s perspective might have been interesting… or novel at the very least. The writing of this story has been an interesting learning experience. A lesson was definitely learned from this chapter.