All Comments on 'The Year of the Cat Ch. 25'

Another great chatper, well worth the wait. Thanks a lot for your effort and keep up the amazing work. ^__^

And better than ever! Brilliantly written. I love the "girl down south" hint as well. I don't normally go for non BDSM stuff, but this...this is delightful.

Ayy was waiting for this. Good stuff as always.

One of the best chapters yet . Keep this great story going, can't wait to see what happens when Kendra gets involved.

Hi - I absolutely love your series of stories! It's such a sweet story! I wonder if your stories will cover birth control? maybe all the women (except her mom) will become pregnant or some jealousy will kick in? Or if Matt wants to start trying some alternative/kinky stuff that's a bit different maybe? Can't wait to hear the next story!!! thank you

Bug spray is a very un-sexy lotion.

Otherwise, another great chapter :)

Will you ever publish another chapter? I'm fucking waiting!

GODDAMN, WHEN ARE YOU GONNA PUBLISH OTHER SHIT? I'M FUCKING TIRED OF WAITING!

In many ways this is a great story. Character and plot development are both great. Knowledge of different locations adds to the trio’s travels and time in Japan. Descriptions of the buxom ladies and sex scenes are top notch.

For me as a picky language critic though, I just offer only this one concern. Some words are consistently misused. EXAMPLE FROM CHAPTER 25: TO THE AUTHOR

It’s “lie” not “lay” for present tense reclining.

And people don’t sigh “contently.” It’s spelled “contentedly.”

EXAMPLE: This sentence from Chapter 25 which says “The three sighed, contently, laying upon the air mattress.” Should say: “The three sighed, contentedly, lying upon the air mattress.”

Thanks for letting me sound off. Helge623