by Jugg_Head
Thanks for posting another chapter - it's been a while.
But this story has drifted so far from where it started. I loved the first chapters, with Matt and Janice falling in love. After that, we got incest and porn careers. Too far over the top for me.
You are a very talented writer and i'd love to see you write more realistic stories in the future.
I'm normally not into non-kinky stories, but I've been very much into this one. Welcome Home
I agree with the other commenter. I miss the simplicity of the first few chapters and the romance. It quickly turned into the trope of "main character bangs all the hot women he meets". The story isn't bad, but it's very much more of the same. Q
I agree that the story is a little over the top currently, but it was an intentional decision of mine to provide Matt with as much ’wish fulfillment’ before he has to make a very grounded choice coming up, which will lead to the story’s conclusion.
In the future I’ll attempt to stay on one side of the line or the other.
This is honestly pretty boring at this point. I think you’d be better off ending this and starting a new one.
Sad to hear about a conclusion coming! It's obvious you put a lot of care into this series. The characters are so wonderful and I'm so invested in them. Thank you for the excellent work and hope you continue writing.
Yo bro, wtf. Can you publish other chapters? We all are waiting for some cool shit