All Comments on 'The Youth Trap, Ch.03'

No profound observations. Just some trite ones.

Be careful of what you wish for, you just might get it.

Do you work to live or live to work.

We're off to see the wizard...

Boyd

not as provocative as the first two chapters, but still a nicely written story. you know, there are readers and other writers who will not like the way you're portraying your slut(Sarah). she is supposed to like cocks anytime and anywhere and do it w/ pleasure and no conscience.

still, cant wait for the next chapter.

This was the best chapter so far. We've seen this type of plot in other stories (where a woman thinks she is so "in control" and finds out she is now trapped in a whore's existence, that she was led astray and the world is not just a big candy jar waiting to be explored, that there really are evil people in that world who think nothing of destroying people when it suits them). That type of plot. But this is still done in a different way and it is quite poignant to see the mess Sarah has created for herself. She is basically a white slave. I think she could go to the police to report the situation, that she was raped -- surely a full examination by a GYN would show lacerations of her three main orifices -- the cops might even get a chance to bust up a ring run by the big "he-man blond god" who tricked her and who is now pimping her out. Or she could have the FBI help -- Mr. tough-guy Stan has violated the Mann Act, at the very least (transporting girls across state lines for immoral purposes) and other charges would obviously follow (holding Sarah against her will, which is kidnapping). She would have to accept the risk that her photos would end up on the Internet, maybe even get sent to Mom and Pop, but still, wouldn't it be nice to see Stan doing time with Bubba? I guess we'll need to wait and see what happens next. I do hope John doesn't turn wimpish and reconcile with Sarah -- he may still love her but clearly what she did to him was hateful, canceled any love she might have once had for him, and while he might perhaps help her, I can't see him ever trusting her again. BTW, in this story, STD's would not be make-believe and Sarah better get tested, n'est-ce pas?

but in reality, her chances of getting HIV or any other half a dozen or so sexual diseases are high up there, approaching certainty. <p>

that's because african americans have the highest infection rates when it comes to sexual diseases. now there's cocktail drugs to stunt the HIV virus, to prolong an injected person's life; but the drugs are still fairly expensive. <p>

imagine that: a 40 plus year old woman being raped repeated for days in vegas and she never complained about it! <p>

so perhaps despite our tar-and-feathering Angiquesophie, she has some plan, after all, for Sarah the 40 year-old beloved turned Vegas prostitute; it's befitting for someone as heinous and shallow as Sarah is.... <p>

"The Youth Trap" may become a meaningful title after all. <p>

the other missing ingredient that needs to be explained is why Frank's wife and Sarah mutually wanted their respective families to stop seeing each other.... Perhaps Frank's wife caught Sarah doing these afternoons with Romeos and in the former's eyes, Sarah was not a person her husband needed to, or should, grow old with.... but finally things are starting to fall into their proper places,,,,

Ive said it before and Ill say it again - I think you are too good for us. Im not talking about the consequences in this chapter either.<p><p>

Im sure I dont get/understand everything you write into your stories but they still hit me hard. I sometimes wish you would write about better people but that doesnt diminish the impact. You are very, very good at conveying emotion and leading the reader into considering new perspectives. I think thats an exceptional achievement. Most writers can preach to the choir but very few can make the readers expand their horizons. Your stories often make me think about the other side of things instead of just relating with the guy (usually just do this given that Im a male).<p><p>

Thanks again for writing.<p><p>

Average-Joe (forgot my login).

Your writing is good. As I said earlier, only you know the journey of your characters, but it is interesting.

Once again - written well & precise. Fiction for many, reality for a few - so with a chapter of self-serving sympathy, we are supposed to empathize with this slut wife? As the fish hook glimmers in the near distance, when will the husband be wimped out to come back and recuse either his daughter or this fucked up slut? Or better said, when will it be explained that her whorish behavior was caused by the wimp husband along? At least the "man-haters" are predictable.

Why didn't the silly bitch go to the police and cry rape? That video wouldn't have meant a thing unless "Stan" had been able to produce a signed agreement to have things filmed (filming somebody without their consent like that is an offence).<br><br>

It has become a cliche on this site - the woman who is raped and then meekly allows herself to be blackmailed into remaining silent. Load of bullshit.

my apologies, dear readers, for not putting "the end" to the end of the story. it should have been there, although, as in real life, life goes on. but don't expect new chapters soon. thanks for reading and commenting.

<p>The 'silly bitch' didn't go to the police because she finally realized that she was a silly bitch! She had allowed herself to be placed in this position in her foolish attempt to recapture a youth she never had. She was essentially imprisoned in a golden cage and raped repeatedly for the weekend. And now she must face the reality of her own stupidity.</p>

<p>I'm trying to understand the comments that claim angiquesophie is a man-hater based upon this story. Such comments make no sense and reveal far more about the commenter than they do about the author.</p>

<p>In the end the husband has his freedom while the wife has created her own personal hell. After a major reality check she now understands the nature of her selfishness.</p>

<p>She has lost everything she worked for in the last 20 years for a weekend of torment and humiliation. I truly like a story with a different point of view. This is an author with talent.</p>

<p>Her writing comes from such a different angle than the majority of writers on this site that certain readers just cannot fathom her meaning. She just too deep for the likes of Harry and his accomplices. So they lash out in hatred at what they are incapable of understanding.</p>

Her trip to Vegas was her pay for three porno films she starred in. You gave the husband and daughter an honorable out. A shame the husband does not have the balls to allow the daughter to make her own decisions about her birth mother. Any man, anywhere can slip away and leave the slut wife holding all of the bills and all of the cleanup work. It would have been much simpler for him to have forced her to move away and out and he to have continued his life as it were so to speak. She was and is, mental and physical trash, you always throw out the trash!

Continue this tale Angie. So much left to be answered. Ending this now is anti-climactic. The slut Sarah must have more retribution than a gang bang in Las Vegas. After all, that is what she was there for anyway. To be fucked, and often. To please her youthful pimp and make him happy. Why and what difference did it make who,how many, and what colors fucked her as long as she got her cunt tingled by young hard bodies? Poor Sarah? Angie, you have unsuccessfully tried to give this worthless piece of trash a certain air of respectability by her telling Stan that "how could you do this to me" bullshit.

I guess I'm a vindictive guy in that Sarah needs to be made suffer. It seems as though she doesn't care a bit about her soon to be ex or her daughter so getting retribution or a pound of flesh from the cunt would be impossible through her family. I know a way. She gets wrinkles,gains 50 pounds and loses the tightness of her whoring cunt. Those seemingly are the only things that would fuck up Sarah. Perhaps an offer for sex from a 70 year old fat man on skid row, instead of a young hard body? She just feels so bad that she shed a tear because someone had taken a picture from her wall ,maybe making it necessary that she wash the wall where it once hung. Oh yeah, she also feels bad that Stan had been so bad to her. How could he? She had given her "all" to him. "I hate you", she said but would have dropped her panties in a heartbeat if he had suggested that she suck his asshole or eat his shit out of the commode. Bullshit Angie, there are no redeeming qualities about this bitch to be found anywhere in the story. Actually, not too many good things in John either except that he cares for his daughter very much, and he is traveling down that "long lonesome Highway."

Like the one commenter said, and wondered, what was the reason Frank's family did not want to associate with her or Sarah with them? So many questions to answer for an author.Perhaps Stan will go after Julie and John will get some testicular activity in his loins. Perhaps he will put Stan's lights out with the cunning of a Republican businessman, and get away with it. Of course this has nothing to do with Sarah. She's just be jealous that her daughter was getting the Attention of Stan, her blonde Adonis.

Please write again as soon as you can my dear Angique and thank you for this chapter, although disappointing that it is that you are discontinuing it for sometime.

FumundaCheeze I dont get it You ripped Harry a new asshole yesterday but here you are saying the exact same thing HE said?

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<i>The slut Sarah must have more retribution than a gang bang in Las Vegas. After all, that is what she was there for anyway. To be fucked, and often. To please her youthful pimp and make him happy. Why and what difference did it make who,how many, and what colors fucked her as long as she got her cunt tingled by young hard bodies?

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Angie, you have unsuccessfully tried to give this worthless piece of trash a certain air of respectability by her telling Stan that "how could you do this to me" bullshit. I guess I'm a vindictive guy in that Sarah needs to be made suffer </i>

you asked--

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<i>I'm trying to understand the comments that claim angiquesophie is a man-hater based upon this story. Such comments make no sense and reveal far more about the commenter than they do about the author.</i>

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Look at the MEN is this story.

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Stan. A evil sadist rapist and pornographer of a man.

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Look at the husband JOHN... a slow dim witted knuckle dragging dork whose Plan ... revenge as it were.. is to drive around the country like a little boy ...

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FRANK .. a supposed professional psychologist. Frank and his wife Marie were close to a John snd Sarah but when Sarah lost it two years ago... Marie tells rank "I dont wnat to see them anymore"... and Frank never aks WHY? ...Frank John's closet friend yet never tells John ???

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Once again every man in this author's story is a evil twisted sadist rapist that has some sort of Power over women OR is a total Moron that only shrugss.

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she wrote early in this chapter

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<i>He never found out the why. Neither did Frank, he said. As men often do, they just shrugged away their lack of understanding and went on seeing each other over an occasional evening of pool or a night at the pub.</i>

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lets go over that again shall we? The author just said most men are stupid unobservant and have NO curiousity about the world.

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when you combine THAT statement with the other stuff this kook has espoused before about men -- her statements in chapter 1 and 2 ... there are solid reasons. You may not agee that they mean anything... but the evidence is clear

<p>you are a misogynist. Period. </p>

<p>You hate women. So you claim angiquesophie is a man-hater because she writes her stories from a point of view you can't understand or appreciate.</p>

<p>Tell me Harry, how did things go for wifey? She lost everything. She was victimized by multiple rapes. </p>

<p>She is such a slut in your eyes, Harry, that you think it is okay for her to be raped again and again. And she liked it, right Harry? Any woman likes gang rape, right Harry, because they are all just sluts?</p>

<p>Gang rape is a reward, not a punishment in your eyes, right Harry? After all, she was asking for it!</p>

<p>The destruction of her world isn't punishment enough for you, right Harry? She needs more. More hurt thrust on her. More pain. Losing everything is just the start. Self-realization is just the beginning. </p>

<p>Oh, but you don't understand about self-realization, do you Harry? </p>

No irony here. Harry was personally taking on the author. I commented on the story and line. Nowhere in my comments did I try to interject any characterization of the authoress at being a manhater or any other thing about Angiquesophie. Harry attacks every author he ever comments about and usually does his best to give them a Zero rating on their works but continues to read the stories. Harry would vote zero on "Gone With The Wind", "Quo Vadis", or any story that has sold a billion copies if there is one. Harry has nothing good to say about nothing or nobody. A miserable asshole if ever was was cut to be made perfect. Yet he continues to read, enjoy, and vote "0". these authors provide us all entertainment for N O T H I N G. The stories are free, the site is free, and Harry? just a fucking critical asshole.....with no good thing to say about anything or anyone but HIMSELF.

Beautiful story of a woman's pride and self-centeredness destroying her life. I appreicate your work.

Kathi

I enjoyed this story and look forward to many more by angiquesophie. If one looks carefully at essentially any story, e.g., in "Loving Wives," inconsistencies and problems with the descriptions and actions of individuals can be identified. The stories in this website are not peer reviewed! I think that if funds were available that they should be used for a group of reviewers of stories and the acceptance for publication rules be strictly enforced. The point is to read this story and gain a feeling for what its all about and how each person in it contributes in his or her-way to it. RAG

Please keep witing. More chapters please. As a clinician, I must say that the wife was much more the depressed of the two. Her feelings of remorse after a weekend of being raped seem somewhat out of character. Her depression wouls not change to remorse so rapidly, I think. How the husband could change to a carefree happy go lucky guy also is out of character. Nevertheless, the story goes well with some semblance of realiity. Her total subjugation in Vegas cannot be explained. She could have escaped. Believe it or not, the hotel police in Vegas are VERY sensitive to their customers needs and this is so very very unlikely to have happened in real life. The hotels do not want any sort of scandel such as this going on. By stepping into the hall and running she would have found help pronto and escaped. I think her rape session is plenty of consequence for her rejection of her husband who was not very depressed. From the number of comments and the type you should draw satisfaction fromo your writing this incomplete story.

Ugly (for Sarah), but nice writing. I'm definitely looking forward to the remaining chapters.

-- KK in Texas

<p>Sorry my comment is so long, but I need to explain why I'm going to go with what Harry said here in part as well. I know the two of us <i>rarely</i> see eye to eye Bullet, but I have yet to be accused of being "misogynist" by anyone. But the man does have a point with his latest comment.</i>

<p>Lets borrow from story two, and part of story three, a minute if we could:</p>

<p><i>Men are like the boys at the beach, teaming up to build a sand castle. Or in the woods, damming a creek. The world narrows around them. They can only see the project at hand. The challenge. And they know they are safe. Their back is covered. At least, they think it is. As they plan their exhilarating projects together, they trust that they are lovingly cared for. Are they naïve? Or do they take it for granted?</i></p>

<p><i>Women have a hard time understanding this outlook. And a hard time <b>hiding their disdain</b>. At best they make <b>mild jokes about it and shrug their shoulders</b>. Women <b>live in the present. They own it.</b></i></p>

<p><i><b>Men don't</b>. They have no time to even see the web. That is why they get so easily caught in it, I guess. Women are sweet and beautiful spiders. They catch men. They cocoon them. <b>And from that moment on the men leave the world to them.</b></i></p>

<p><i>As men <b>often do</b>, they just <b>shrugged away their lack of understanding</b> and went on seeing each other over an occasional evening of pool or a night at the pub.</i></p>

<p>Ok Bullet, at what point does these passages from the story <i>not</i> support Harry's first comment to part three of this story? That's why agree with them. Parts of the story basically call me (or males in general) stupid beings (if not stupid barely functional) who, if women weren't around to keep us from poking our own eyes out with carrots, we'd never get fed. Lord forbid we be given cutlery to eat with. Using bare hands should be enough. That's <i>exactly</i> how I felt after I read these passage, and various others, in part two and three of this story.</p>

<p>All of the men in this story don't behave as if they were real people. In the story they behave as if they have no real ability to function on their own, beyond having a good time. You know, like small boys do, but not as real people would. Only Stan acts assertive, and he was displayed as a real jerk and a total prick. Like how some feel "Alpha Males" are supposed to act. All the other men in the story are basically just as bad. The only positive character was Julie.</p>

<p>To expand on what Harry said about the male characters introduced:</p>

<p>-John is diagnosed as having depression, that is what caused his rift with his wife. No one knew this, because he functioned through out the day and covered it well. I don't see this. Then when faced with his wife rubbing her year long affair in his face, after she secretly gets some other men she's sleeping with it cause John to "overhear" her affair, he explains it away to his daughter and basically tries to cop to half the blame. He does this while making it seem like his wife was bored because he no longer brought anything to the table in the relationship. That is not a bad thing, but the dialog didn't feel like something a slighted person would say. It felt more like a romance novel of how he "should" have said it. This character stopped being a believable character right after this happened at the start of story two. None of his reactions were believable to me from that point on, and his revenge of giving her the divorce she wanted after quiting his job of 20 years didn't feel like revenge as much as it felt like he was running away so he wouldn't have to deal with the situation anymore.</p>

<p>-Stan, the Alpha Male. Prick, pimp, adulterer, and Porn maker. Need I say more?</p>

<p>-Frank, John's best friend, doctor, trained psychologist, and when his wife and Sarah decided that both couples didn't need to hang out anymore as a trained psychologist this didn't raise any red flags? He walked away from a problem this big? And when him and John got together, he never noticed his friend wasn't functioning properly? And it wasn't till John told his friend of his divorce and his wife's cheating that he noticed? And the story added this part that totally had me disliking frank: <i>Even now he maybe thought it had been him who drove Sarah away. <b>But it had been his illness.</b></i> I guess I may have read more into this than I hope the author meant, but it seems like both Frank and John feel his depression and Sarah's need to feel young lead to her affair. That they were 50% equal in her desire to cheat on John? Oooookkkaaayy</p>

<p>-Bit parts played by "various" different men who were to be Sarah "rapist" of the evening. Where Sarah couldn't get away, at a hotel, where room service delivered food, where she got a massage, and she had to do two more nights of gangbangs for boyfriend because she had no other options?</p>

<p>Bullet, I challenge you to find one positive male introduced in the story.</p>

<p>The only intelligent character is Julie. And while that is not a "bad" thing, the thing I find hard to believe is that no other person is capable of doing the right thing. No one.</p>

<p>And no, not everyone is "misogynist" because they find slights all through the stories about men. Just because the story seemed to be riddled with slights, and I don't like the slights, doesn't mean I "hate women" if I don't laughingly agree with the author as she pretty much calls my species a bunch of stupid knuckle dragger's incapable of a serious thought on our own.</p>

-Risq

In this story as with several others you don't seem to have a clue about men, how they think, react or live their lives.We are as complicated as women and react differently to different things, but none of your males seem real, just made up and one sided. Will read rest just to finish it, Thanks.

<p align="left">Sarah might be a shallow, self-centered, narcissist but no one deserves being gang raped.

<p align="left">Harry is so full of shit he has brown streams running out of both ears. Harry thinks hubby is a dim witted little boy for taking himself out of the equation.

<p align="left">Harry, a real relationship is based on trust. Hubby trusted his wife and not being a loser like you, he didn't run around continuously checking up on his wife. On the other hand, she took full advantage of his trust and love. Of course it's a shock when you find out your trust, faith and fidelity has been abused.

<p align="left">I was once in exactly hubby's position. I did exactly the same thing hubby did - I extracted myself from it. It was one of the best decisions I ever made. Look at it like this; why should I (or hubby) hang around and be miserable? Everything around him reminds him of betrayal and loss.

<p align="left">In my case, I reached both homicidal rage and suicidal despair. Being far away from the situation saved me from killing one or both of them. There was something new and different each day to keep me from self-destruction. Eventually I stopped drifting, went back to work and made a new life for myself. That new life included a wife who has been my friend, companion and lover for more than a quarter century and two children who are the lights of my life.

<p align="left">When I look back and see what I could have thrown away for the fleeting satisfaction of violent retribution, there is no question in my mind as to the correctness of my decision to simply take myself out of the situation and leave the two lovers to each other.

<p align="left">The amusing thing is that neither of the two lovers seemed to realize that trust, honor, fidelity were just words without meaning to their new partner. My retribution came just from leaving them to each other and in the end, my ex-wife paid a high price.

You are truly an exeptional writer. This story was interesting more so for the fact that it actually told a story that was both believable and realistic. I am in my forties with a wife who in many ways embodies the characteristics of "Sarah". No I don't need the sympathy it is a fact of life that I have come to accept.

My kids are in their teens and it will be a few years before they to depart for college. Only God knows what the next few years hold but I can certainly relate that after 25 years of being together the end is on the horizon. Your writing hits the nail on the head so to speak. Perhaps it should be a wakeup call for me to take action and change the direction my life seems to be taking before its too late. Perhaps.

I am eagerly waiting for the next installment and I strongly urge that you keep writing. You are truly an exeptional writer.

again, there seem to be no average person in this story besides the daughter. just week assholes in one or the other way and with week I mean the wife too as much as Stan. the husband finally comes slowly to life but still a world I wouldn't want just a tiny bit

I was slighly sad to read that the story has ended. These character were transmiting to me a flood of emotions. It is a reasonable stopping point because each of us can fill in the gaps with their imagination.

Risq and Harry seem to live in the world where everyone lives on the point of the knife and has to out alpha everyone else. They would have our authors only write about people that they could like and respect. The interesting thing is that I have met very few people who do not have fairly obvious defects. They are frequently more interesting than the archetypes! ( and I have my doubts about thou Horatio---)

Now in this story we have a woman who has turned forty, has been shagging other men for two years. She really doesn't think a lot about men. Now for some reason she is protrayed as a highly successful women who knows what she wants and gets it. And she does. Now after letting her husband leave her, which is what she wanted, she allows herself to have a gang bang, all against her will of course, after all she hated every second of it. I am not condoneing rape, but given the information by the writer she lets us think that Sarah did enjoy it. so she comes back home and cries out because she realises she made a mistake. A women make a mistake? god forbid! it does happen however, equally men make mistakes too. But in this case I believe the husband to be correct, except I would really do more damage to my soon to be ex-wife than he currently has. As for the writer? does she hate men? I'm not sure does she hate women? again not sure, I think she needs to find another spieces to like. Anyway well written story just a little unbelievable but then this is a fiction site. People are allowed to make things up. I know I do!

No one can rule the world. And men and women for good or not are stuck with each other. And somehow we have to live together.

What some impressionable people believe is that the readers should, no, COULD, never question the author/creator of stories and characters. That the author is God! <p>

(You don't question a being, THE Being, if you believe in HIM, right, and you further believe HE created every atoms in the universe.) <p>

These easily impressionable readers, be they young or old, think the author is beyond reproach, and we should, COULD, only discuss his/her little fake creation: the characters! I mean, what the fuck is that?, really? Characters in any and all stories are just PSYCHOLOGICAL make-ups of the complexes (pseudo Freudian) of a human being, of the author. <p>

Of course, it goes without saying some authors are really clever --- using subtle and sophisticated story telling techniques like parable, allegory, irony, paradox, etc. so effectively --- so it is kinda difficult to take them on. <p>

And, to be honest, Angiquesophie is pretty decent as a writer for venues such as this. But looking at the few stories she/he has churned out here in Literotica gives you enough clues that there's not much in any thing in the way of subtle or ironic or allegorical story telling. It's mostly straightforward, brutal, and masturbatory cliche, with a tilt against men, as Harry relentlessly observes.<p>

So.... while the last chapter, three, was a bit more balanced --- in that "she got what's comin' to her" --- a decent reader still gets a sense of what Harry's ranting over: <p>

the men are, in most of the author's stories, morons and cry-babies, from Frank the psychologist, to John the "I am so mad, I am taking a long drive across the US, and I don't even care which direction; I'll have my daughter make the decision for me by having her flip a coin..." <p>

LOL

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Here The Bullet -- this is why <p>

08/19/08 by Harryin VA <p>

you asked--<p>

I'm trying to understand the comments that claim angiquesophie is a man-hater based upon this story. Such comments make no sense and reveal far more about the commenter than they do about the author.<p>

Look at the MEN is this story.<p>

Stan. A evil sadist rapist and pornographer of a man.

Look at the husband JOHN... a slow dim witted knuckle dragging dork whose Plan ... revenge as it were.. is to drive around the country like a little boy ... <p>

FRANK .. a supposed professional psychologist. Frank and his wife Marie were close to a John snd Sarah but when Sarah lost it two years ago... Marie tells rank "I dont wnat to see them anymore"... and Frank never aks WHY? ...Frank John's closet friend yet never tells John ??? <p>

Once again every man in this author's story is a evil twisted sadist rapist that has some sort of Power over women OR is a total Moron that only shrugss. <p>

she wrote early in this chapter <p>

He never found out the why. Neither did Frank, he said. As men often do, they just shrugged away their lack of understanding and went on seeing each other over an occasional evening of pool or a night at the pub. <p>

lets go over that again shall we? The author just said most men are stupid unobservant and have NO curiousity about the world.

Thank you for your refreshing outlook. I may not like how you characerize men and women but diverse views should never be discounted. When Sarah dumped John in favor of Stan she clearly sought out someone who would dominate her. She rejected John's loving and mellowed ways as wimpish and weak. She set up John's finding out that she was a slut so he would leave and she could have more time with Stan. The fact that Stan recognized he had a slut that he could use well that is the nature of the beast. If Sara really objected to the gang bangs nothing would have stopped her from leaving Stan. Remember she had been with many men so Stan was not the only dick she could fuck. The one part which did not make sense was the psychobabble about John's Depression. Come on! Frank has a drink with John for ~ one hour and he blame himself for not seeing his depression. John then wonders if his depression drove Sarah to become a slut? By that time she was well on the path she had chosen. Sara probably shared her desires with Marie which is why they were no longer friends. Did I feel sorry for Julie, John or Sarah? No! John got away from someone who was not worth his time. Julie saw the truth about her mother which becomes a valuable life lesson for the decisions she willl have to make in the future. Sara got what she wanted -freedom to be who she was. Thanks for a good read!

...Angiquesophie's stories or the comments posted. The only thing I would say is that I thought this story was going to run like for 7 or 8 chapters and I'm dissapointed it ended early.

Cheers!

John grew his balls back. Yaay! He decided what he wanted to do and went after it.<p>I sympathize with the "anon" who had been in a similar situation - in some ways I too have been there and done that, except I had 2 elementary school aged kids that I obtained custody of. My ex is quite a bit like Sarah (after 25 years, she's on husband number 5, with who knows how many lovers in between).<p>The comments are entertaining; I can see the argument and understand both sides. At the end of the day, I think this was a well written and credible story. Living well is truly the best revenge.

The best story I have read on Literotica in 5 years.

Superb!

The regression and change/contortion in her 2 chapter established character traits isn't explainable or rational except as a little too little & too late writer reversal to be more accepted. She chose to be there and to stay there -it was in keeping with her bitch profile of a selfish all knowing man hating slut.<P>

Was this or the prior just a sick dream or a nightmare?<P>

Who knows - or really cares. There is but one pleasing aspect of this story - the end which was 3 chapters late.<P>

The authoress is quite talented but doesn't seem to understand or want to understand her customers reality or needs. She has always alienated over 90% of her possible readers and many who weren't male. Here was 2 chapters of infused intense male hatred - then it flopped into a possible temporary disbelief given what preceded it. <P>

She didn't like the new lack of control but did what happened - then maybe since it hurt maybe it did or didn't -gee who unequivocally knows or really cares given the prior and the flopping which perhaps really isn't. Its not confusing - you are. HUH?

If one writes for a few or self then thats all that happens. The rest are offended. It would be interesting to see the writer try to write a story exterior to marriage where she has failed time after time. Perhaps when she grows up and out - or never.<P>

Reader irritation should never be a goal of writing as it doesn't satify either party either short or long term.

I felt that the dramtic rape of Sarah (are we agreed it was a rape?) wasn't a worthy means for you to make your Sarah character assess her errors. There was so much scope for a writer of your class, so many 'normal' events availible to penetrate her sanity. IMHO some damn good dramitc potential was wasted.

Thank so much for writing

Really great story

Bit predictable, but isn't that what we all really want from a story like this

Thanks for a good read

As usual the writing is fluent and good, very good even, and certainly better than a lot of other stories on this site. However, the ending left me unsatisfied. I would have liked/expected John to come on stronger and extract more revenge. If only by taking legal action against their employer. It would have createc some turmoil there since, after all, she was that Cunningham-cunt from accounting and a simple investigation would have revealed most of her actions from the last years. Then there was the unexplained problem between Sarah and Marie. Something must have happened there. I can't believe that a professional psych as Frank would not be able to find out what, and even if he could not/wanted tell his friend John directly, he would have been able to let him know indirectly what was the cause or what was going on. Sarah chased a dream of uncommiting youth and casual sex. But fucking collegues and clients in abundance made her just ripe for Stan, who took all and gave nothing. To work in accounting she must, at least, have some rational and logical mind. She surely must have realized that sooner or later she would be found out. She was even amazed that John never seemed to notice, even if she, how considerately, did not give him sloppy seconds or made/let him eat her out after sex with others. She must also have realized that if she was found out, her easy life would take a major dip. She has been spending "a good chunk" of her own income solely on herself. Did she expect to gain so much from her divorce or did she expect to be supported by her lover(s) to be able to maintain her good standard of life. I have no sympathy at all for this evil character. She went to Vegas for plenty of sex but got more than expected, or was it too much in too short a period. From the story, she seemed to have liked it, up to a certain point at least. Not to approve of rape, Stan saw her for what she was, a cheating and whoring slut, and took advantage of it. Period. She could set him up now and pretend to forgive him, tape it too, and then tell him she will file a claim for sexual harrasment unless she gets her films back if they are not released yet. Of course, such would only give her a limited revenge on Stan because she would be fired just as well and all would be revealed. Of course, she no longer has to pretend for her family. She could just quit her job and start over somewhere else. Yeah, consequences are ... In any case, I agree with others here, I too feel there should be a sequel with more explanations or details of the consequences, but please no reconciliation. That would kill the story. G.Belgium.

Thanks. Husband came off a bit bland but he did not wind up repeatedly getting abused. A good thing.<P>

Wife has sown what she has reaped. I don't wish rape on anyone though. Not benefiting from her lies and deceit would have been enough.<P>

Very satisfactory story. Thanks for sharing.

The ironic thing that stood out for me, was Sarah getting the same treatment from Stan that she had doled out to her former husband; callousness, indifference, cold hearted disdain. Not to mention all the future escapades she can look forward to. The pay back is just too perfect, especially since she set herself up for it with NO HELP whatsoever from her Ex.

Well done Sophie! :)

I appreciate your writing. I got a little lost with the psychoanalysis or why the shrink thought that he should have seen it coming. I also thought that the Las Vegas scene was over the top. Even if the men paid Stan? for the opprotunity, it was still rape. Furthermore, wifie was too old for anyone to pay much for, you can get young cheap at most of these places. (When I first started out traveling for sales, I had a partner who could bed anyone. Once I saw a beautiful woman smile at him and jokingly asked if she was one of his conquests. He replyed, "I don't pay for what I can get for free." He pegged her for a prostitute. I never indulged because I love my wife and I'd be too afraid of catching something. BTW, the comment entitled "Escaping The Prior Plot Floppily", I don't get at all.

Regards, Ttom

Is there any more to this story? I expect there to be more somehow.

... best story, but still a very good one! - It would be very interesting to hear somewhere in the futur, how their lives went on, perhaps from the daughter's perspective? Hopefully Sophie or some other good sequel writer will take the challenge. -----Bavarian-----

This was an excellent story. I think it was one of your better ones. I don't think it is finished. Hubby driving off into the sunset and wife learning some of what she lost just didn't seem complete. There needs to me more. There needs to be a cathartic meeting or confrontation. You are a talented author. Although I don't always agree with your positions or attitude, your talent is real. I look forward to more.

Great plot.A good aftermath showing sarah point of view it will be good.It´s hard to believe how shallow someone can be.

You could continue to write but then you might feel the need to have time pass, wounds heal, and for her to grow up and gain a conscience; for him to see the world, but feel lonely not sharing it and fially go home and find her and take her with him because she finally has stopped being selfish. Please resist that temptation and let us imagine the ending we want: for those who favor reconciliation at any cost, they can go their way; and for those who think she should sink in to the everlasting oblivion of cheaters hell, can hope he has a happy life with a good woman that he finds on his journey and discover that there relationships that can be healing and whole and equal. And when Julie gets married that he can look her in the eye and say,"I am happy and do not need you any more for that." and then walk his daughter down the aisle while the bitch sits in back wondering why she ever ...

Very good story.

loved it,no sillyness right to the point she in her mind was better then him and their friends it happen everyday usally with the same ending.

That's right, she wanted a strong, dominant man in her life and found one. To funny that he turned her into a whore and soon to be coke addict. I saw no rape, just a dominant man turning out a vain selfish woman. No more needs to be written, she made her bed and will have to sleep in it while he's off seeing new sights and having new adventures. Poetic.

Sarah deserved what she got. Well written and nice ending.

What a talented writer you are.

I appreciated this cheating wife story told from a woman's perspective and with the flaws, strengths and eventual self awareness you presented.

Thank you!

But you are out to lunch on men, I've shuffled around this mortal coil for over 60 years and I have never met as mild mannered milksop as this husband. Oh, we would have given her the divorce but believe me pain was earned and deserved for the cheating parties. Lawsuits, or at least loss of certain appendages. A woman's fantasy!

First, I didn't like the story. And I like cheating wife stories.

You intially start these chapters by attempting to say something profound and artistic. And I found nothing profound or artistic inside of them. So this meant that the start of each story was a crawl.

Next, I didn't believe the male character at all. Men don't go incredibly self reflecting like that. Not in this airy fairy drivelly way. He didn't read true to me. Vapid.

I actually got the Sarah Character and thought her motivations, rationalizations, and actions seemed realistic. Even if you didn't delve too much into her background in the story. Your word count would have been better served directly on the characters.

Last, the whore transition didn't work at all! No No No! It would have been just as emotionally devestating for the woman to suddenly find that Stan, after pronging some man's wife, and finding she was clingy and available, dumps her at the first chance and goes with a much younger model...or even hits on the daughter. Or started bringing other guys in to sample her wares without porn. Or...there were a LOT of plausible other scenarios, but to think that she could not escape from a hotel in Vegas, she couldn't scream? No.

Your story needed a moralizing element, but this wasn't it.

I liked the overall story and it was well written but I echo the criticism of others about the poor male characters. Sarah was an interesting character. She was supremely vain and arrogant about how wonderful she is and how entitled to the lifestyle she is pursuing. She is enthralled with the idea of a dominant, take what you want lifestyle. I'm not sure that has anything to do with youth but that is what she wants and deserves. She looks at her husband and daughter as peons with childish attitudes about love, respect, and loyalty. Sarah's behavior is well written and fun to read. She is a royal strutting peacock. <br><br>

And her fate is entirely in her own hands. She said what she wanted and admired, she aggressively went after it, and she got exactly that. Stan took what he wanted. Sarah found out what parents try to teach their children about using drugs. It can seem attractive and fun but there are grave dangers of overdose, tainted drugs, being out of control and vulnerable to sexual assault and physical danger, association with bad people, huge expense, long term health risks, and legal danger. Sarah exposed herself to a hot and aggressive lifestyle and she got burned. Did she deserve to be gang raped? She emotionally raped and discarded her husband. Did he deserve that? Did Sarah learn anything? We don't really know. She was hurt physically and emotionally by the rapes. She was hurt by Stan's betrayal, an echo of what she did to John. She recognizes that she caused her own problems to some extent. But we don't see enough more to know how much the lessons sunk in. She was wonderfully arrogant. That doesn't just go away. She might figure that Stan was just the wrong guy. <br><br>

At first, John leaves a very bad taste in my mouth. He is just too willing to accept complete blame. He is inhuman. He says "Honey," he went on, wondering why his voice was so calm. "All considered there is no one to blame but me. And time." All his wife's behavior was perfectly OK? He should have been able to accommodate anything his wife desired? Suppose his wife decided she wanted to torture and rape children? Would that have been OK? I think a mistake that authors make is that they want to push their characters into a deep pit so that when they make a turnaround it's more dramatic. But John's pit is ridiculous and unbelievable. He has NO, absolutely no self esteem. <br><br>

I DID like his realizations while sitting on the fallen tree. I think that was very well done. He had been living life a certain way and his perceptions were what he needed for that life. But it wasn't real or accurate. Now he sees how the world is quite different than what he thought. The life he had was screwed up. He might not have done anything wrong, per se, but he bought into a broken lifestyle, not even realizing it. Now he sees how broken it was. Also he sees that there are MANY wonderful possibilities for a better life. All he has to do is go look for them. THAT was very believable and well done. <br><br>

Also, many psychologist characters are poorly written. This one is as well. His wife wants to stop seeing his good friend and his wife and Frank just let's it go. Really? REALLY? If you wrote that Frank knew why but didn't have any details and didn't want to hurt John with rumor and suspicion, maybe OK. But cluelessness?

Good ending. Consequences, as they were for in the circumstances. A career move for her, if the job somehow suddenly went away. No sympathy for Sarah, where she cold blooded and calculating, finding things are not as she would wish. And John, it freed him to find what had been suppressed for too long.

you pay. A hard lesson for her, even if she somehow finds redress through the legal system..

A really good story. Will be reading more of them. Keep it up. Thanks.

No woman would have stayed past the first night to be raped....most would have called the police. Blow the perp in as a rapist and pimp...

about as entertaining as the story.

Her closing line was priceless. Excellent.

Or risque?

For Sharing.

You have an amazing command of the language and your stories always cause strong feeling. I hope you come back and write some more.

As above.

I did not see a single error re narrator speaking in third person. It's so easy to slip into first person on occasion. Glad I found this and I hope A/S returns to share her stories with us.

some memories carry over for a long time, TK U MLJ LV NV

Stan gets away, free without any consequences. Gave a one star, for that reason.

John is a fuckin stupid wimp.

Presumably, she stopped loving John not because of Stan but rather became enamored with Stan as part of her having already stopped loving John...

John always putting her first was a MISTAKE on his part... but an unintentional one... Sarah made a mistake (or two) as well... but each of hers was premeditated.

She CHOSE to turn John's acts of love into something bad... something to be sneered at and denigrated...

And yet, if she really WAS so proud of what she'd done... even fucking around on her husband... then why refuse to just spill it all to her daughter...? Yeah, because she knew it made her the bad guy and she didn't want to accept that label.

Based on her previous thoughts and actions, I'd be hard-pressed to believe that her tears are for anyone or thing other than herself. While it would have been nice to "fly on the wall" her next conversation with her daughter, it's not necessary to the story...

I came back to read this again - something is missing. It's all Stan when before it wasn't. Now ..... The plot is broken.

When face with a horrible situation the best solution is to separate yourself as fast as possible from it. He did. The next thing to do is to consider your course. He could stay and roll in the mud with the pigsult or he could chose otherwise. He had fulfilled his responsibilities as a husband and a father. His daughter was grown and his wife had died and turned into a pigslut. So, why not explore the beautiful world! Good for him and all those that do not give in, and those that do not waste time rolling in the mud with pigsluts.

Being repeatedly raped and sticking around for more seems far fetched.

I normally don't like the total BTB endings. You went off the farm on this, but this selfish bitch got what she deserved. It appears as though you left her with little of any value. She's over forty, and thinks that she can keep an apparently gorgeous younger man who can have many younger beautiful women. She's delusional, and deserved what she got. Thanks for the effort, even if it was rushed and formulaic.

... beautifully done, C'est magnifique. Thanks a bunch. loved it

... Dive into light

This doesn't seem to have and ending to me. At least not one I like anyway.

Lost her husband,her daughter,and her dignity! A perfect ending!

She works with Stan? Maybe I'm alone, but I'm curious about how the author envisioned this after her weekend. Seems she'd be out for a little revenge, too...

She got everything that she deserved....I agree with goodhue..

You could of at least given us a longer and much better ending. :)

That's IT?????????????!!!!!!!!!!

It SUCKS!!!!!!

truly bad. 1 star. This one seem to stop just when most of this genre are just getting going. There was potential; wasted.

Very clever story. *****

but can't help feeling another couple of chapters would have made this story great.

You're an amazing talent, but the forced gangbangs? That's so cliche'.

The fucking asshole Stan got away free. That is awful. Even if she killed him and spent the rest of her life in jail would have been better. Letting that shit head off ruined the story.

It ended the.only way it could. Sarah blew herself.up and lost her family while finding out what a nothing she was. Sorry to see you fall into the usual LW trope. You can't have a decent basketball game or gang rape without the big black guy.

This story was just not ‘my cup of tea ‘. If this one is any indicator of this author’s style, I don’t know that anything else she has written would appeal to me either. Oh well, movin’ on.

I have read now several of the series from angiquesophie. This was not the author's best, but was decent enough. Author's other stories under LV are very good.

All are well-written. Most have the virtue of plausibility and reality, and that is very helpful and important, because the stupider the story and the more implausible, I lose interest.

You at least could of tied up the loose ending(s) to the story and there were many.

Amazing tale of regret and self-discovery, you continue to be one of my top favorite writers in here.

Very well written. Good character development, good insight into the mind of a woman on the path to self-destruction. I hated Stan, but that was the intention. It's fiction, you have a fascinating mind!

As for the haters, they've never known love.

'Could be fun, no?

Good, but I wished you continued it for a few more years story time. Sarah's obsession with youth and men destroyed her marriage and her life. There is a reason they say hindsight is 20/20.

Gave it 4 *, but needs to be finished. Just to much left out and ruined what was a great start.

She's Beautiful, Has No Morals or Ethics, And Loves To Fuck.

She'll be remarried to a rich fool within 2 years, Max. Then she'll buy Julie back, slowly but surely. She'll accept All the blame for the failure of her marriage, apologizing to Julie, as they sit by the pool, or the terrace, or the ski lodge, or wherever she will lure Julie and coyly display her new wealth.

Yeah, Sarah's soul is dead, but she's had no use for that for years. She'll be just fine. She won't even notice the day her heart stops beating. She won't feel a thing, just like any other day.

Thanks for the effort.

Strange. It feels like that all that needed to be said was said, but at the same time, the end feels premature.

Surprisingly I am not satisfied with this ending, and it is one of those where 'the bitch' get it. The other works of the author are more dark, but with a certain neunce of satisfaction this lacked. Great work still, just lacked a little of that spice.

The massive kidnapping and rapes can't go unaddressed.

Readers are like the boys at the beach, teaming up to build a sand castle. Or in the woods, damming a creek. The world narrows around them. They can only see the project at hand. Women authors have a hard time understanding this outlook. And a hard time hiding their disdain. They love to meet and talk -- to weave a collective web that spreads in all directions. They catch readers. They cocoon them. And from that moment on the readers leave the world to them. And the readers know they are safe. Their back is covered. They trust that they are lovingly cared for. And the women authors have a hard time hiding their disdain.

Come on now, HONEY, don’t you wanna live with me?

LWlurker

You struck someone’s nerve. Agree with pultoy.

LOVE slap*hapy*papy. #9

the racism was unnecessary and ruins a pretty good story. I stop reading right then. Oh well..

As a few already mention, where is the ending? How is his life? What about her? There should some kind of revenge on Stan.