by MarkVSharp
It might be weird, but I enjoy the alter-ego portions of most super-heroine in distress stories much more than the super-heroine portions. I'm looking forward to this story.
Really enjoyed this, and Ch 2 as well. Thank you and I'm looking forward to what's next!
Thank you! I really enjoyed this and looking forward to more chapters. Fun premise. Sigh... too easy for me to relate to the MC, but whatever.
@MormonJack: glad to hear you enjoyed it!
On MC cutting too close to home; I mean, yeah for me too. While there are several aspects of him that are quite different from myself, a big component of Zip is certainly my own (at this point rather distant, admittedly) memories of what being a frustrated and horny teenager was like. I think, unless they are quite lucky, most dudes go through a period of having to figure out how to deal with rejection and how to find a sexual outlet; Zip’s backstory is basically that experience purified up to a weaponized degree.
Plus I personally find it hard to believe that anything but the saintliest dudes don’t meet an extremely hot chick without at some point within the first few minutes thinking ‘god damn I wish I could just make her clothes fall off right the fuck now…’ So yeah, I expect quite a few dudes might find him more relatable than we might like to admit.
On another note; chapter 3 just got submitted. They’ve been coming out pretty quickly so far, so should hopefully drop soon. Hope you enjoy it as much as the first two!