All Comments on 'Theatre de Amore Ch. 01: Opening Night'

Looks like a very promising (hot, naughty, steamy, sexy...[and whatever else everyone's Thesaurus provides about erotic adjectives]) kick-off to another story series of yours. Thanks for taking us on this expedition into the Lands of Lust. Looking forward to more adventures...

Hopefully we will see many more chapters of this promising erotic saga.

i will start in all honesty: i have been a dedicated, engaged, enthusiastic fan of this author from the moment i read the first of the Lessons (check the list, you ll find them there). I have rarely been that mindblown.

so, the bar was somewhere up in the heavens, and this story for me doesnt get close, not remotely.

a house is being drawn for me but i can not seem to feel the fabric on the walls,

or gather the scent of the candles ... i can literally feel the construction at work, and how every word and beam is properly placed - but i remain somewhat cold.

you could also say - here is an author choosing another approach, and i just happen to not be the appropriate company. which says more about me than about the author, whom i ll love no less because of this.

oh, and one thing - still a master of

"the prolonged state of arousal (that) in itself nearly (is) as satisfying as indulging in sexual whims"

Thanks to my fellow readers who have already left Comments about this Chapter. : )

I'm sorry to say that I sympathize with "beruehren"'s disappointment: until the last 2 scenes of the chapter, I (myself) saw more "blueprints" (if you will -- using the architectural metaphor) and "backstage talk" about an "opening night" than anything which moved me (and the talk about the various floors leaves me confused -- although I hope that the confusion will lessen in future Chapters).

(I did find "connection" and response within me to Selena's interactions with customers -- especially to the lawyer -- toward the end of this Chapter; perhaps the writing flowed more easily after some "exposition" of the story's "setup"/premise.)

I'm glad that Our Author has returned to publishing her work at Literotica (Welcome Back to her : ) ) -- but I will say that I agree that this story (at least up to the parts in which Selena interacts with customers) is a *very different* kind of story from Lessons Learned.

I look forward to seeing what happens in subsequent Chapters.

E. in New York City ("nycreader" at Literotica).

(Sorry: I forgot to say anything specific about 2 of the 3 Comments before mine . : ( )

I'm also glad to see the enthusiastic responses from "29wordsforsnow" and from the "Anonymous" Commenter who Commented before I did. : )

E./?nycreader".

Glaz, I loved it! Both characters, Selena and this Lawyer are delicious. In my heart hope he doesn't end up to be wimpy in coming chapters because you started him off just right, with quiet, strong confidence! Woman, this is the best one I've read for awhile, thank you for writing it.

My middle name isn't Kassandra, so I won't speak about a possible future, but of the past: if you go back to the comment section of Lessons' Ch. 12 you will see a very disappointed reader who struggled with the abrupt end, and did a 180 soon after Ch. 13 was published...The Theatre involves much more characters than the Lessons, so it probably will take more time to see all the decoration brought to the house and be hung on the walls.

You're both right, beruehren and nycreader, it is a different approach, but I'm quite fond of it. I would have been disappointed if it was a story line that would follow in the footsteps of the Lessons just with different names. It's what makes great authors, to create a new world that is spiced with surprises and twists each time again.

I really hope you stay tuned for the next chapters and see life coming to the construction site.

29*

Loved it! Can't wait for more!!

I'm glad to see more-recent enthusiastic Comments here (including the 2 from women) ; this should encourage author M8dOvGlaz (a good thing). : )

E. in New York City//"nycreader" at Literotica.

I love how you take us inside the main character's head. Really hot stuff. :)

Good job on this -- good writing, very sexy