All Comments on 'Theft of the Heart'

Please continue, great start!

Really like the first chapter, I just know one of them is going to be his mate. I hope you post the next chapter soon keep up the good work......

I'm guessing Nicholas doesn't know about what they are doing after he helped them. It sounds as though they have everything they could need from Nicholas other then having the thrill of robbing people.

I wonder what is going to happen when Aleks find out the girls are connected to Nicholas. Its going to suck to be them when Nicholas finds out who they decided to rob.

Great start! Looking forward to the next chapter. I think one of the sisters is going to be his mate and there is going to be a battle of wills between the two.

Can't wait for more...

And no one even thought of what if the twins are were. WHAT HAPPENS THEN MORTALS?!?! MUAHAHAHAHAHA! >:D

Edit* what if the twins are weres?

Why do all non-human writers use weird names?!

Because they're non-human.

More please

Got sucked in straight away and loved it but it ended very abruptly and I would love to read more.

You write very well and I am very impressed that I have nothing bad to say about your story. :)

Really bball in the middle of a robbery, classic

for 4 chapters not even 2 pages each? you have got to be kidding! I regret reading and liking this story :(