All Comments on 'Their Own World Ch. 03'

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meuci almost 6 years ago

great start

I really enjoyed the story so far, hopefully the rest will be as inventive and stimulating, Great fun so far!!!!

Lonely_reader almost 6 years ago

Very good chapter

I loved that they didn't end up having sex right away. The characters seem to be very well thought out and still have room for growing up.

Curious to see how you're going to continue.

Professor_Chaos almost 6 years agoAuthor

Thank you for the feedback. I'm a fan of buildup, especially with these characters. It seems appropriate to me that no matter how well two people know each other if there are real feelings, they would want to enjoy the ride. As for growing up, they will. This is the beginning, I already know the end. The trick now is making the middle "inventive & stimulating."

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It's been a year since I started writing mainly erotica. I've had many story ideas over the years and life always seemed to get in the way of sharing them with others. Then I decided to use it as a way of clearing some space in my brain as well as therapy. Now it's an active ...

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