All Comments on 'Their Surprise'

by bawdybloke

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AnonymousAnonymous6 months ago

Add Part 2 he fucks Margaret

AnonymousAnonymous6 months ago

Nice tale; want a chapter two now. Does he go back and screw his daughters knowingly.

AnonymousAnonymous6 months ago

Chapter Two please

AnonymousAnonymous6 months ago

Hmmm ... I smell a MFF threesome

AnonymousAnonymous6 months ago

I enjoyed this and now I feel dirty. I love your writing.

AnonymousAnonymous6 months ago

Continue it! Please

NudeInMaineNudeInMaine6 months ago

I liked it. I’ve seen vids of Czech glory hole rooms where the lower half of the woman is naked and available.

PaulaCD318PaulaCD3186 months ago

Loved this story. A great surprise ending.

Tom_BrownTom_Brown6 months ago

Loved this. Hopefully there are further father-daughter encounters. Maybe he goes back and fucks the girl in the blue fishnets. Then, it would be nice to hear that they decide to fuck away from the club and without the condoms. A threesome with the father and his two daughters!

Maybe they set up Margaret’s husband to fuck the mom?

So many open avenues!

AnonymousAnonymous6 months ago

Reminds me of the old joke, a husband finds his wife servicing John's at a whorehouse. He asks, "What are you doing here? "

She replies, "What are you doing here?"

AnonymousAnonymous6 months ago

Irony is a great tool in literature. Always good for a laugh.

AnonymousAnonymous6 months ago

Story was o.k. I just don't go for the accidental incest stories. Kinda old hat.

AnonymousAnonymous7 days ago

This is a nice little story.

If our nameless hero, maybe also has scruples about fucking his daughters in the future.

So there is still his daughter-in-law, who can be tempted by Alicia and Margaret to improve her household money at the club.

Since Robert and his wife have been trying in vain to get offspring for some time, our hero can also help his daughter-in-law with this.

I'm curious when our hero realizes that his wife is "Fat Pat"?

Das ist eine nette kleine Geschichte.

Wenn unser namenloser Held, vielleicht auch Skrupel hat, zukĂŒnftig seine Töchter zu ficken.

So gibt es ja immer noch seine Schwiegertochter, die von Alicia und Margaret dazu verleitet werden kann, sich im Club ihr Haushaltsgeld aufzubessern.

Da Robert und seine Frau schon seit einiger Zeit, vergeblich versuchen Nachwuchs zu bekommen, kann unser Held seiner Schwiegertochter auch dabei behilflich sein.

Ich bin mal gespannt wann unser Held realisiert , das seine Frau "Fat Pat" ist?

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