All Comments on 'Theo, Prequel Ch. 02: Sex and War'

by EstebanMamono

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Anonymousover 6 years ago

Oh my

It's just like witnessing the buildup of a trainwreck, unable to do anything... want to unsee, but can't. You're great at such kind of stories.

Btw, you have 10' tall Agrat walking around the castle, and then she's "just" 7' during the feast. Is it just an oversight or she's able to shapeshift? (or, perhaps, I just got it wrong)

EstebanMamono over 6 years agoAuthor

My mistake

Sorry.

Anonymousalmost 4 years ago

My 2 cents

Still liking the story. Please continue. 5 stars. Thanks for your time and imagination.

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