All Comments on 'Theo Sequel: Otep's Last Case Ch. 01'

This was really good. I loved the way he was licking between her legs so intensely. 5*.

Just that? Man, I felt kinda bad, maybe because I used Shiva and Kartarirya as villain entities? :D

No, that was the bit which stood out most to me. I write and read stuff for the sex, and the plot when it's technical. :P

I didn't comment much about the other aspects of the story since I'm writing a thesis at the same time as being online. :)

I like the plot, I like the sex and the backstory. Deep detail, great characters. This will be an epic series!

Feel Free to read the preceding story, Blood Angel