All Comments on 'Theo's Secrets'

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AnonymousAnonymousalmost 4 years ago

need more to the story line please..... more chapters.....

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 4 years ago
Good

Oh I assumed that saving the world was your day job but now I see it’s a story series.

Excellent writing but I loved this story as a standalone. Another standalone with the same characters would be cool tho

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 4 years ago
Female and male dynamic relationship seems off and annoying

Boring.

julianmarquezjulianmarquezover 3 years ago

Pretty good, though I would have preferred that the story was kept in his perspective instead of switching between the two.

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Fledgling storyteller. = u p d a t e s = Hi all! Unfortunately, life has gotten the better of me once again, and it will take me quite some more time to update To Save A World. I still do plan on continuing it, but unfortunately, I just can't make it a priority right now, a...

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