by evals22
fanasy is one thing,but dumbness is all to stupid.
this has been a good story so far. this last chapter was alittle over the top. I know Frank has some plan for Debra, but I hope you don't make the husband the wimp in this this is going way behond what he wanted and some revenge on Frank and Julie is in order. I have read your other stories and don't think Dan will be a pawn or wimp for them, just hope you let the couple fix all of this and maybe save the marriage before thing get to bad and Debra turns into a complete submissive slut, if that happens she will no longer care about her hubby or marriage
this has been a good story so far. this last chapter was alittle over the top. I know Frank has some plan for Debra, but I hope you don't make the husband the wimp in this this is going way behond what he wanted and some revenge on Frank and Julie is in order. I have read your other stories and don't think Dan will be a pawn or wimp for them, just hope you let the couple fix all of this and maybe save the marriage before thing get to bad and Debra turns into a complete submissive slut, if that happens she will no longer care about her hubby or marriage
In a word - "Yourself" - Oh yes and a few sickies!
It is somewhat a shame - soo much time and talent spent on so little of worth or appreciation.
How little you must respect yourself - Why???
You can do better and you know it - why belittle yourself through your work - demeaning, depressed, pitiful, jaded are all adjectives you know well.
Simple solution really - change - if necessary get some help as this is not a long term healthy outlet!
those that can write right those that cannot complain
You've gone too far with this story. It was an interesting story until this chapter.