All Comments on 'There Is No Way You Did It'

Unreadable.

Horribly written story

This fails on story content - there isn’t any - and on readability. The English is the worst I’ve seen on here, and it makes it incomprehensible. Two stars for the idea, but I won’t be reading any more of your submissions until you get yourself an editor with lots of time and patience.

@anon: Sorry if it's horribly written, could you elaborate further? I always seek what I could improve, I assure you as the writer that I will edit this later if I know where to improve it.

Nice try, but you need to work on your English. I suspect it isn’t your first language - it’s always hard to write in a foreign language. That said, all your characters talk like Yoda, which is beyond distracting.

I hope you continue this one it's a fun read