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AnonymousAnonymousover 1 year ago

1st POV is always, always, always bad. This is certainly no exception.

maximus_ambrosemaximus_ambroseover 1 year agoAuthor

I don’t believe first person is always bad. May not be the most preferable, but I believe 1st POV makes it more personal and immersive. With the right setting and narrative, I think it can truly capture reader’s attention and imagination. I’m always looking for feedback, so please let me know what I can do to improve my writing, even if it means switching to third person.

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They say a picture says a thousand words, but there is no limit to where a story can take you, even after it ends. Give into your hidden pleasures and indulge in your carnal delight as my stories take you on a lustful journey. Hello my name is Maximus Ambrose! My sexual journ...