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by mrboom

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angelicminxangelicminxabout 19 years ago
Constructive criticism:

Overall a good storyline. Frequent grammatical and spelling errors detract from the story somewhat. A very fast read, I enjoyed it. <Smile and a wink> ~Minx

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