All Comments on 'There's Room in Our Bed Ch. 01'

You really do think up some beautifully filthy plots and you write them so well. I was wet by the end of page 1! Can't wait for chapter 2.

You do make it fun all round, hope there is more cumming

so far only did read half first page : MAJOR COMPLAINTS - STOP JUMPING ALL OVER DAMN PLACE ( the three

of them out in swimming pool . father tells daughter go order pizza . than suddenly . poooooooooooooooooof .

father gone . Libby along Maxie talking on the sex subjects about Michael ) { lots times just in the first half story

zero names being mentioned who's talking who's listening } [ obviously Libby's gotten busy other females

other women . even though nothing said nothing mentioned . because otherwise wouldn't ever approve Maxie ]

....... repeating again - so far only did read half first page . regardless complaints . fully good really good .

i've am gonna continue some more cannot everything sometime soon

You have a flair for this.

it worked magic on me, wishing I wad the Daddy in the story and you were my little girl.

would be so hot

Another great Daddysgirlfl yarn! Looking forward to the next installment.

Cheers

SAGE

Loved it! Very fucking hot! Hopefully in the next chapter, the two girls will go down on each other while getting fucked by the two brothers. Five stars and a favorite point!

Great writing!

Lots of good scenarios to stroke to.

I hope they have Greg for a 4some