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Click hereThe door to the coat room was open and the desk lamp, previously hidden by purses, gave a soft illumination. Max lay asleep, stretched out on her back on the daybed, boots off and woolen socks mismatched. Katherine was starfished across her torso, dark hair flung wildly. On Max's left, Veronica was snuggled close to her mother's side, sound asleep. Adam was curled in a tight ball around Max's right arm, her hand cupped loosely around his ankle.
Those warm feelings that were always present around Max suddenly rushed forth, closing up her throat and prickling her eyes. Love, they shouted to her. Love! Love!
'I love her.' Emily's mind was empty but for that single realization, echoing endlessly.
Beside her, and seemingly unaware of her inner revelation, Tess gave a careworn sigh. "Little tykes wore themselves out. Momma too." She sniffed delicately. "I'll make sure to tell Max you said goodbye. Which coat was yours?"
Emily blindly fumbled for her belongings, her racing heart pounding in her ears. "Thank you, Tess, for a wonderful day, and for including me. I'll just..." Emily gestured toward the hall, already stepping away.
Later, she would hope that her exit seemed less hurried and didn't show the panic she felt at these stupid emotions finally naming themselves.
Later, she would let the tears fall as she resolved to lock those unwelcome feelings away. Love was more than she'd bargained for, and something she wouldn't push on Max.
Later, after a cleansing cry and soothing glass of wine, she would admit to herself that she was in trouble.
I do hope one day you’ll return to share another installment of this wonderful story. In the meantime, I’m thankful you that wrote it at all.
I’m guessing by the amount of time that has passed that we won’t see another chapter. I was so caught up in this story I didn’t realize it had ended. So much of it unresolved, I still don’t really know how Max feels but I can’t imagine she doesn’t share the same feelings. I’d like some back story on max and why she isn’t dating men ... there are so many aspects of her that you haven’t touched on it developed. I guess I’ll just draw my own conclusions. Anyway thanks for this story it made me smile ...
Your talent in writing poetry is great so fine sensual enchanting
Oh my god I love this series so much Just read both and had a stupid grin on face for almost all of it. I know this hasnt been updated since january but you have no idea how much i want another chapter. God I cant wait to read the rest of your work next.
Several “more please” comments surely convince you to share more - poignant, erotic, great characters