All Comments on 'They Wanted My Wife'

I love the premise and the wronged husband's reaction. It is so good that I think there is a lot of potential for further development of the story, maybe the wife's rationale, how she set it up, perhaps how she was seduced into the idea by the other participants??? Love the writing and the situation development, and my desire for more is simply a compliment to the powerful storyline and its great capacity for exploration of possibly?) a potentially naive wife who thinks she can force her husband to join her fantasies, how the damaged husband corrects any possible misconception as to his acceptance of such a misconceived and ultimately selfish alternative to a proper marriage and relationship....

Wish the story would have continued. Needs at least a part two. Good job.

Very well done short story. 5*

That was so good that I wanted another four pages.

A good start, but needs a lot more. 2 stars because of that.

Could have been real good! But to short!!

Not bad. Though it begs for a continuation.

Finish the story. Good start but you never finished. 2 Stars

This was such a good beginning. Can we get another chapter

I would have liked a lttle bit more either background or in conclusion

This must be what's called a "flash story" on here. Too many words for 750, and not enough for a real story. This would have made a nice base for a good story though. I liked what I read, but just not enough of it.

I hope there will be more

And then what the fuck happened

A great start for the story but you stopped midway. Not the 1st story I've read from this author like that. If you write a story for posting, have respect for the reader to finish it. 2 stars on that- a shame, really. Bob

You REALLY need a 2nd part or conclusion for this story, detailing the fallout!

Its just an intro, are you not aware that a story requires a beginning, a middle and an end?

It is a great start. I agree that it needs to have a follow up.

And then what?

This a great story that stands without the need for any additional prose. I can't understand people with no imagination needing additional verbiage. They would probably have the Founders still writing the Constitution. This is a five star short story. I get it.

Ed

Ok if I wanted to read stories where I have to imagine the ending/conclusion myself then I’d just write my own fkin stories. But I’m terrible at actually formulating coherent sentences. So that brings me back to why the fuck would I want blue ball myself like that? Also there’s a big difference between ending a story and just leaving out an ending. This one was fine but some stories legit feel like they just stopped short. Boom wait till next chapter but there is no next chapter. Idk man I think you should try and write a conclusion unless you have some witty plot twist that makes you go “hmm shit”. I have read some that are really good without the typical ending that we come to expect, most of the time it’s just unsatisfying.

What a waste of time reading this. You insult your readers when you have them read your story only to discover you left it unfinished.

As much as I liked the story and will agree with the consensus that there could be more, the story in itself is self-explanatory.

The fact the MC was drugged places all involved as complicit and thus open to criminal proceedings, not excluding divorce.

Why do you people write a piece of a story and then just stop? Are you too stupid to finish it? If I wanted to read partial stories then I would read mysteries and not what is supposed to be a complete fucking story on here. Damn you are so fucking annoying.

Needs more

That was great and it needs a satisfying author-created conclusion

Too simple and short, a little more background maybe.