All Comments on 'Thick and Thin: The Beginning'

Is this story now out of sequence?

That sucks having read the middle and the end already.

What the hell happened?

The entire story is ruined.

Scores 2/5

So the chapters are out of sequence, what a disaster.

Sort of ruins the story somewhat, what happened?

I'm sorry, but you're saying you gave the story a 2 just because it got posted out of order?

[Deep breath here] I submitted all three parts in order, with a few days in between, so they would post in order. Unfortunately, part 1 was rejected, but not until 2 and 3 were in the queue. I fixed and resubmitted part 1, but 2 and 3 still got posted first because they were then higher in the queue. So, like you, I was disappointed. But now I'm even more so if the story is being penalized for an administrative snafu. I guess i could have just submitted it as a single 55k word story, but thought more manageable bites might be better for readers. [Deep sigh]

I'm glad I caught onto the out-of-order publishing problem and waited to read the story until The Beginning showed up. As you mention in the Afterword after The End, I also generally like happy endings to my Loving Wives stories, but good job interjecting some harsh reality into this one.

Lost me at whore wife.

It was in proper order when I read it, or at least it seemed to be. But enough about posting issues.

I think that her husband should be just a little pissed off at his wife. First she shaves off half of her bush that she knows he likes. She does it for Lance, the car salesman neighbor. Then she gives up he anal cherry to Lance. If there is more to this story, I doubt it will end well if there is any reality to it.

Lot of time hubby spent admiring Lance.

Well it’s full of descriptions, Personal I don’t like the drugs side of it, but it’s a story that I am sure has happened many times before in real life, get her drugged on whatever and get your jollies while she’s off her head, not my style, but I can see it’s what alotof men love to read.