All Comments on 'Thief'

I think Allison more or less planned the whole thing, right down to our narrator finding the white queen. Acting nasty to someone in high school often is designed to hide an attraction, and there was certainly a big one between these two lusty adolescents. I think if he plays his cards right (unclear that he will) he'll get Allison naked again and enjoy the same consequences; that is, if the twins don't get in the way! Well done, Allison! 5*~~JB

Well, that was a fun start. Thanks for twisting her words around and finally getting into her. It was a nice twist for sure.