All Comments on 'Third Date'

by GoldenrodTN

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OmenainenOmenainenover 3 years ago

Sounds like a perfect match! Hope they’re just getting started with each other. Nice story for only 750 words.

SouthernCrossfireSouthernCrossfireabout 3 years ago

Here from the 750-word project. You did a great job with the set-up, allowing you to tell the tale and get the erotic part across mostly in the mind of the reader than through wasted words. Loved the ending, too. Very well done! And not just the bread!

GinloverGinloverabout 3 years ago

An excellent reason to burn dinner and go hungry.

WillowghbyWillowghbyover 1 year ago
I Agree

The previous comments are right-on! Thanks for the "quickie," GoldenRodTN.

Keep 'em comin'.

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50 something guy who likes to read erotica, decided to try and write some. Just some fantasies, maybe inspired by memories. I love panties, and everything that lies underneath them.