All Comments on 'Third Party Candidate For Wild Sex'

So she was a swinger in her first marriage. She never was anything but a slut. And she has found the perfect wimp to marry. Pathetic tale told as a pathetic fantasy for woman who can not love. Next time you write either do a lesbian story or a masturbation story as neither have men in them as this story didn't.

The story did not need you to get married again. You are a single and free woman. Try writing about that instead of having a 'man' who will do your every desire, just because he loves you.

It seems that when John and Gloria do get married, they will have a good understanding of what they want out of the marriage. John wants to be married to a slut, and Gloria is most willing to satisfy his need in voyeurism. With all of the ground rules laid down before the marriage, they should be happy......Rich

Another great story from one of Literotica's best writers!

I have a bit of a problem with some of your phraseology ;-

"He dutifully did his duty" - er how else?

But apart from that pretty good.

This is her looking for a meal ticket.

She does not love, respect, or even care about him only his money.

So a quick run up of some horse to get her addicted and off to the brothers whore house.

"Oh darling! Let's do.this every week forever!" Silly ass story, let's not write again ever

You need a good editor. Make up your mind. Is she his fiance or his wife. You vacillate between the two. A strange relationship, especially between a man and his future wife. Maybe after a marriage and they talk and talk, then fantasize, then negotiate. But before marriage? Nah !