All Comments on 'Third Wheel Renter'

But the biggest detraction is the constant shift from past tense to present tense for no timeline based reason. Makes it a bit harder to read

Love this story. This type of ‘oblivious to change’ mind control story is my favorite! Hope we see the next part soon!

The jumps from past to present tense aside; this was wonderfully written. I did think some of the things he convinced them of to be a bit far-fetched, but it didn’t break me from my interest or arousal.

I am looking forward in which direction you take this! Can’t wait

...make this something of an annoying read!

I made an account just leave a comment on this story. Fantastically done!