All Comments on 'This Can’t Be Happening Ch. 07'

Loving your writing. As I responded once before, I really enjoy you writing in the first person. Our biggest seed organ is our brain and you are letting us get very intimate with your inner thoughts, which in turn make your series even hotter. My training came at the hands of my neighbour's butler. In fact he taught me all I know! I'm sure the swim coach is going to be David's second teacher and I can't wait to hear. My thoughts have gone straight to Mark Foster who is incredibly sexy

Oh yes, I enjoyed this chapter more than I can say. I can't wait to find out where this is going with David's coach. I'm even wondering is something will happen with Lewis. Or, and this may a stretch, but a threesome with David, Lewis and the coach. That would be very HOT! Thanks for another ***** plus chapter. MLF

I have a physically sickened feeling to the abusive spanking and belting. I hate it and it ruined this story for me. I feel an actual hatred for Phillip that he is abusing his power and age over this young man to a nearly criminal extent. His coach will notice the welts and bruises the next practice and will not buy some BS story about falling this time. I don’t think I can continue with this one.

Perfect stories man. This series is hot! I love the combination of exhibitionism, submission, and older/younger humiliation

would love to see david getting used by a really fat daddy

Liked it!

I'm not in to pain; but, the way you wrote this I see the sexual arousal was a result of the pain and domination by the boss.

I would like to see Lewis taking over for the older men! Great so far....but I'm not into the belt etc.