All Comments on 'This Can’t Be Happening Ch. 15'

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DevonCowboyDevonCowboyover 1 year ago

Stunning! Thought you'd stopped writing but so glad you haven't, and really, really well worth the wait.

AnonymousAnonymousover 1 year ago

WOW, I don't know how you can keep surpassing the previous chapters, but you are! And the longer chapter double the HOTNESS and the pleasure of reading this ***** plus story. Once again, I can't wait for the next part. MLF

JP0920JP0920over 1 year ago

So so so hot. I love how much of a sub bitch David has become. Now he really needs to get fucked

AnonymousAnonymousover 1 year ago

The number of people David is entertaining continues to grow. It’s concerning that he goes into trances and starts to faint when he is so aroused. That could lead to very dangerous risks if he’s in the company of the wrong type of people. I hope he saves his virgin ass for Lewis instead of just some rando 71 year old from the pool!

spankedpussyboyspankedpussyboyover 1 year ago

YES! I was like a giddy school girl when I saw you had a new chapter! Love that David's virgin butt is finally getting some love. But yes, hope Lewis is the one to take his virginity. Keep writing...you're so good.

sealandssdsealandssdover 1 year ago

My memory is foggy. So Phil did not fuck David?

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