All Comments on 'This Generation Ch. 01'

It's annoying that you use characteristics that are deemed "white" to call the girls Oreos. Being a ballerina of color who can boast about being in a company is wonderful! It doesn't make her an Oreo. And since when is Jimi Hendrix for white people only?! I don't mean any harm. Just thoughts.

No man mentioned, write more soon

Story holds promise, excited to read more.

Couldn't get past the first few paragraphs.

Good start..a few errors here and there.

Can't wait for more.