All Comments on 'This is our Accident'

CONTINUE this was a great story

Great story. I hope you decide to add to this

More please...

Hope chapter two cums soon!

Interesting story so far. Im keen to read more.

You mentioned you were sorry about errors but I didnt find any that effected the read of the story so good job on the writing side of thing.

This needs a part two. A "Will she, wont she?" Needs an answer. I liked the first part.

Loved it. Would like to read more!!!

Marred in places by a very badly needed pass or two from a competent editor.

I loved it hope there is more

That was amazing. Please don't leave us hanging for a part two here.

Hopefully more to follow

I think this deserves at least one more chapter, if not more. Not a bad read at all.

That was fun and sexy too. Please keep going with these two.

"I will continue the story if it does well."

What? No, you need to continue this! You can't just leave it at that! At least another part where they take this to the next level!!!

Really good. Look forward to the next in a series that should be several stories! Very well done.

I liked it, now I want to know how they move on from there.

Yeah, you definitely need to continue working on this story. Hopefully, you'll take them to a very affectionate and loving place. I normally would have given you just a 4 for leaving the story incomplete like that. But I gave it a 5 as encouragement to continue with it.

OMG this story is fantastic!

The first of your stories I have read and I enjoyed it. I prefer a little more build up myself but that is my quick. As to your opening comment I didn't notice errors of any sort. A.