by KSWifey
Very well delivered. The pauses were very effective, they really helped to drive home the delivery. I also think it all sounded really natural, adding a good sense of authenticity. Something that really elevates this above the rest is how its not all
Exquisite. the silences are almost, but only almost, as deliciously arousing as your words and your voice.
The lovely thing about the pauses is that it leaves room for the listener to add their own responses - the hard part is trying to only respond n my head - it might surprise the people on the train!!
ok the thing is. your style seems a bit too centered around a story, which is good and all, but sometimes it needs to be a lot simpler.
i came here looking for someone to straight up tell me what i wanted to see. like "you want to see your gf do this and this .." or "imagine her doing that to someone else". ..etc. But there's clear lack of content on literotica for that format.