by UghOkay
Well done! Your dialogue had me LMAO. If you want, you can certainly write another epilogue! Loved everything!
I loved this story so much. It's not a Romance Novel, but it should be made into one! I loved this so much! I just laughed and laughed at this. It was so cute and funny. I also liked Cunt Waffle, that was gold! I also loved how quickly you wrote it and released chapter after chapter. Thank you for this. It made me smile when I needed it the most! Kudos, and keep up the GREAT work! I stan!
I loved this crazy assed story. Please write another. Thanks
Had to look up some words. Beeeeing a old fart. Fun to read. Probable gessd is edumacated. Slap hapy papy #9
Remarkably good. Very skillful portrayal of seriously creepy characters, to the point that I was skimming the sex scenes because I wanted to find out what happened.
The Nia/Henry relationship went a little fast, but this *is* literotica, so ... {shrug}.
I seriously commend you, and rate this story 5.
This was such a refreshing read. Great descriptions and overall plot. Looking forward to reading more of your work.
Phenomenal! I laughed out loud at "you killed her AND at her cake?'! You've got talent!
- MC