All Comments on 'This Isn't a Romance Novel Ch. 04'

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AnonymousAnonymousabout 5 years ago
I can’t believe it’s over

Well done! Your dialogue had me LMAO. If you want, you can certainly write another epilogue! Loved everything!

AnonymousAnonymousabout 5 years ago

That was really funny😂😂😂😂

AnonymousAnonymousabout 5 years ago
Haha "Cunt Waffle"

Props on that.

AnonymousAnonymousabout 5 years ago
Except for the Ass Licking...

I loved this story so much. It's not a Romance Novel, but it should be made into one! I loved this so much! I just laughed and laughed at this. It was so cute and funny. I also liked Cunt Waffle, that was gold! I also loved how quickly you wrote it and released chapter after chapter. Thank you for this. It made me smile when I needed it the most! Kudos, and keep up the GREAT work! I stan!

hisangelbeautyhisangelbeautyabout 5 years ago
Hot mess

This story was a hot mess, but damn I was here for it!!

MinxieleeMinxieleeabout 5 years ago
I loved it

So funny, It had me laughing and holding on thru it all

tjdhall2tjdhall2almost 5 years ago
This Isnt a Romance Novel

I loved this crazy assed story. Please write another. Thanks

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 5 years ago

Had to look up some words. Beeeeing a old fart. Fun to read. Probable gessd is edumacated. Slap hapy papy #9

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 5 years ago

Remarkably good. Very skillful portrayal of seriously creepy characters, to the point that I was skimming the sex scenes because I wanted to find out what happened.

The Nia/Henry relationship went a little fast, but this *is* literotica, so ... {shrug}.

I seriously commend you, and rate this story 5.

AnonymousAnonymousover 4 years ago

Best series on literotica.

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 3 years ago

This was such a refreshing read. Great descriptions and overall plot. Looking forward to reading more of your work.

AnonymousAnonymousover 2 years ago

Get your head checked

AnonymousAnonymousover 1 year ago

Phenomenal! I laughed out loud at "you killed her AND at her cake?'! You've got talent!

- MC

AnonymousAnonymous4 months ago

Maddest thing I’ve ever read. 5stars

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