All Comments on 'This Misadventures of Jessica Ch. 01'

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rorr82rorr82almost 2 years ago

They have hours of sex but you describe none of the action happening? Plus you make her seem very stupid as any person would have fled immediately when she was told she had to fuck them to keep her job. Not a very believable story n the lack of details made for a not very good story. 1 star

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 2 years ago

Part 2 please

AnonymousAnonymousover 1 year ago

This is so poorly written and believability is zero.

GoddessViolet86GoddessViolet86over 1 year ago

I will never understand the people that come to this specific genre of non-consent and complain about the rape erotica. That being said while this is not a horrible story I do feel like it's very rushed and you could have and should have spent more time explaining what they did to her. I look forward to more

DarlingKDarlingKover 1 year ago

Loved it!! More please!

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