All Comments on 'Just Some Harmless Flirting'

did you read this?

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finish blagh ok

always good to add a bit of constructive criticism I think, if you're going to have a go.

Yes it was a bit short, and the characters were not immediately endearing. However this is just the start of a story and who knows where this is going yet.

missbrown, your first paragraph suggests an epiphany of sorts, so I'm very interested to see what happens next :)