by worshipper622
More please - even as a standalone the story develops nicely and concludes without any need to stretch it out any longer
I don't recall my education being that interesting... Kepp this story going...
great read...
A well written and edited story. A pleasure to read a well crafted piece of work.
Erotic and vividly expressed sex scenes made for a very good fantasy.
Thanks for the good read.
Great job! I like how you brought us along. I would like to see a second chapter, if possible. Maybe involving the other daughter.
It was kinda weird for me, because I don't really like mother daughter scenes, but it was good., and believable. I think it is just fine as a standalone, but if you want to write more go ahead.
Shame it's stand alone, deserves to be a series. All the family and Will.