All Comments on 'Those Days of...Ch. 01-05'

Every author has a different style and every reader has a different preference. The style of this submission happens to match my preferences. As an example, I usually hit "previous page" when I detect something written along the lines of "I looked into your eyes, undid your blouse, bra and skirt and then ..." (you get the picture, first person singular recital of events). This submission tells a story, and tells it well.

This is the first series I've read of yours..Very well written, very good storyline, I'm looking forward to many

more chapters and to reading your other works..!!!

Don from the Southern Tier of New York State

I loved the story Toni Its a battle between the sexes like mother and daughter i would love to read more of your story lets see more chapters please.

Pat Murray

Atlanta,Ga

soo hot